April 29th, 2008

Pilot. Pt. 1

My 1st fic; be as harsh as you'd like, please just leave comments. I'd like to hear other people's opinion on this.
And I might post up the 2nd part if you guys would like. :)
And there's been a little mix-up.
-In the story, the man named Finch represents Dean.
-The man named Franco represents Sam.
-And the girl named VON Grimm, well, she's just in there for kicks; there was a much needed humor to this family.
-And Brad, Penn, and Chace are just minor new characters.

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